Critique: Modify

 After the not-so-wonderful first rounds of critiques, we basically did a complete revamp of Modify, but after all of the struggles, I'm pretty happy with how everything is shaping up. Some of (okay, most of) my stories were cut, so I've been assigned new stories, but a few have remained the same. I'm still trying to push myself to think outside of the box, so let me know your thoughts! But be gentle, many of these are DEFINITELY still in the works, I just wanted you to get an idea of where I'm heading here: